New Ideas

We have decided we need to change some of our music video because we believe there is too much focus on narrative, which could make the video seem amateurish.  Some of our latest ideas include:

• Including more shots of sparklers in intro to remove scenes of shopping
• OR: having performance in 2nd half of intro
• Replacing shopping narrative (First few shots) with shots of person being strangled against a wall. Cutting between shots with performance.
• Replacing shots of happy relationship with a person potentially overdosing (lyrics: "Life can be such overdose")
• Replacing the next happy relationship shots with the effects of the overdose - changing colours, odd camera angles, flickering lights, 360 shots of girls on floor etc

In summary:

 

Make the video themes darker and include more abstract scenes to elevate the professionalism of the video.